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[Bridge Kids: Chair Jordans]

great as always

[Reality Bytes: Virus Alert!]

i liked when eric ripped that guy's brain out

[Bridge Kids: Stranger Danger]

gets funnier every episode

[Aidan and Melissa : Summer Extravaganza]

its finally here!!!!!

AidanSludge responds:

I love you

[DELTARUNE x GTA 4 Loading Screen [Pixel Animation]]

MR. BEEAAAAST

[Eddsworld - Surf & Turf Wars pt. 1]

Good animation and everything but I guess my main criticism would be to just get to the point? the jokes linger too long, there's barely any music, etc. This didn't have to be 12 minutes long and the fact that it is only works against it, you guys don't need to have every joke explain itself.

For example: The joke in the beginning where Matt says he and the sun are old enemies and then it holds on the sun for like 5 solid seconds, then it shows Matt walking on the beach, his outfit bursts into flames and he looks back at the sun, then covers himself in sunscreen, then the sunscreen hardens, then he puts on an umbrella hat, then he bumps into people, you get the point

Instead a better joke would have been:

Tom, Matt, and Edd are getting out of the car, Edd looks over and sees Matt frantically covering himself in wayyyy too much sunscreen. "Matt? What the hell are you doing?" Matt turns and says fearfully "Don't you know? The sun and I are old enemies" they look at the sun, nothing, cut back, and Edd goes "uhh, ohhkay?" and then walks away giving a confused glare, Matt looks back up at the sun and its only now giving him a dirty look, cut back, Matt gasps and like flinches, then they move on

Imagine that joke over the course of maybe 20 seconds

I get writing is hard but not hard enough to justify milking every joke for as long as possible, you guys can do better I know it

Also just put some music or SOMETHING in these episodes man they feel so uncomfortable with all the silence

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The ghost printing out a black sheet of paper was so funny I almost fell out of my chair and snapped my neck, 100% worth it

[The Spongebob Squarepants Movie]

over the top violence, nice